Friday, July 25, 2014

A Note on Essays


There is less than a week before the bar, so I thought I'd share a few brief tips on essays.  There are certain mistakes that all of my students tend to make, and it matters not what state you are in!

The point of the bar, besides torturing you and taking away your summer, is to test whether you can be a lawyer. Not whether you know the law, that is what your Juris Doctorate signifies.  So how does one prove that you are capable of practicing law? First, issue spotting. The bar overseers want to ensure that when a client comes to you, telling you about their no good very bad day, you don't skip over some of their problems. Your first job as a lawyer is to identify the claims, or legal problems, since your clients aren't going to do it for you.

Next, lawyers analyze. Or, if you listen to lawyer jokes, we argue.  Yes, you need a conclusion, but it's not the most important part of your essay.  Focus less on the conclusion, and more on how you get there. Look at it as a "it's the journey not the destination" type of cliché!  In addition, remember that we all have a different perspective, and we all might view facts differently, so explaining how you get to a certain conclusion is going to help you gain points. It also shows the examiners that you can advocate for a certain point of view, which is what they are looking for.

Last, don't be afraid to write simply and use plain language. This isn't a law review article, and you're not going to win a Pulitzer. Ditch the flowery and overly verbose language. Think "how can I get my point across and move on", especially since the graders are reading your essay VERY quickly. You want your essay to be easy to read, because that makes them happier! It also makes things easier on you. It's ok to be repetitive, or to use a formula. I can assure you that if an English teacher would be horrified by your writing, you are likely on the right track!

Most importantly, this weekend do something  relaxing and nice for yourself. The bar exam is not something you cram for. You need to be well rested, both physically and mentally, for this marathon of an exam.  Get some sleep, clear your head, eat well......and then go kick butt!

Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Passachusetts No More!


By Tania N Shah, Esq. President, LawTutors, LLC
The July 2012 Essay portion of the MA Bar Exam renders the commonly known nickname “Passachusetts” no longer applicable. Compared to the last thirty bar exams, these essays were by far the most issue-laden and challenging, especially with respect to the time given to answer each question.  With 36 minutes per essay (to issue-spot, outline and write), Massachusetts is definitely making their bar students rise to the type of challenge we see in states like New York, California and Florida. 
For example, in Question 7 of the Afternoon Session of the Essay Exam, a student is asked to analyze the various issues surrounding a domestic relations question. In the past, these usually focused on straight forward pre-marital agreements, support and custody issues. This essay, while involving  agreement and support issues, also included capacity to marry, void and voidable marriage (drunk impotent creepy CEO husband who marries 16 year old), interesting contractual  issues, issues surrounding modern conception (IVF), and issues surrounding forcing someone to be a baby-daddy.  While the concepts themselves are not too difficult, two significant changes must be noted from the Domestic Relations question of the past:
1.       Instead of just a few issues to focus on, just about every Domestic Relations issue one can imagine was tested in this essay.
2.       The issues involving capacity, contract, support, ante-nuptial agreements, and divorce were numerous, not always straight forward and very dependent on one another.
3.       A student still has only 36 minutes (not a change).

Question 8 in the Afternoon Session was a mix of torts, ethics, contracts, corporations, and, just for the heck of it, criminal law.  This poor lady who used to be the VP of a corporation has everything in the world happen to her in the above-mentioned essay question. She is recruited by another corporation, told she must steal the secrets of her old corporation “or else”, she calls the lawyer of her old corporation who doesn’t care what she does, she calls her own boss who threatens her, and once she gives the information to her new boss, the new boss fires her and then both bosses attempt to defame her in all sorts of ways. Of course our poor ex-VP gets depressed, drinks too much, the bartender makes her take a cab home, and the cab driver has a record.  And, just to make things more tragic for our victim, she ends up getting beaten by the cab driver. But wait, you want to hold the cab company responsible since they never checked the cabbie’s record, but alas, the record is based on speeding, not beating passengers.  And the bartender…poor guy was just trying to be a good guy, wasn’t he? So what to do with all of this? And only in 36 minutes?
Question 3 in the Morning Session was another issue-laden essay involving just about everything that can be tested in a property essay. For starters, a student must understand that MA is a title theory state, and what that means. Then, they must also discuss:
·         Everything on easements (express, implied, prescription, merger, written)
·         Mortgages and the laws of foreclosure, what happens with recording and the difference between  Subject to and Assuming the mortgage
·         Equitable Servitudes and Restrictive Covenants
·         Nuisance
·         Fraudulent Conveyance and After-acquired title
·         Impact of Title Theory on all above issues
One must note, every  property issue in this essay seems to depend on how one analyzed the issues before that. And the seventh issue may be dependent on the first issue, which may or may not affect the outcome of the third issue (if you could even find the third issue). It is not just the numerosity of the issues, but the complexity in the ways that they are tested that has significantly changed in the last couple of years. So, you know, perfectly doable in 36 minutes right?
Lastly, Essay Question 1 in the Morning Session should make law schools in Massachusetts seriously consider making First Amendment a significant portion of their Constitutional Law Class (1st Amendment is often offered as a separate class and not part of the curriculum in a “regular” Constitutional Law class. In fact, some schools do not require constitutional law at all). It is not just this bar exam: Massachusetts LOVES the First Amendment, especially in the context of a school setting.  I have this listed as the most highly tested Constitutional Law topic in Massachusetts since 2002, with equal protection (especially in the context of affirmative action) following as a not-so distant second. But I have seen the First Amendment come up more in the last few years than ever before, and it seems like it is always going to be a hot topic. On the bright side, this is way better than getting stuck with, say, the Habeas Corpus question they tested once or the Eminent Domain question tested another year.
The Massachusetts Bar Exam has changed. So what? Well, take California for instance: nobody has ever called California’s bar exam “Passachusetts” (not just because it doesn’t rhyme). California’s exam has always been extraordinarily hard to pass. 30% pass rates are no surprise. And Florida, for example, has always had those maddening Florida- specific multiple choice questions that could be based on seven topics, but always on four for sure, and sometimes on the other three. But regardless of their difficulty, students know what to expect.
The Moral of the Story: Massachusetts is an evolving exam, and, as evidenced by this summer’s exam, it is not evolving into something that makes life easier on law students.  Hence, it is crucial that bar programs designed to teach to the Massachusetts’ Bar Exam evolve with it, or else our students will find themselves in a difficult disparity between what they might expect and what they actually get on exam day.

Thursday, September 8, 2011

So you failed the MPRE?

So you didn’t pass the MPRE the first, or second, or fifth, time around. What did you do wrong? What can you do differently?

First and foremost, do NOT beat yourself up. This does not mean you didn’t study hard enough (though maybe it does!), or that you’re not ethical, or that you don’t know the rules. It could be that you didn’t study the RIGHT way.

1) What you needed for professional responsibility class is not identical to what you need for the MPRE: The course that many of you are required to take, called professional responsibility or ethics, is not necessarily geared towards helping you master the MPRE. Some professors may bring up the MPRE, or give you practice MPRE questions, but most are geared towards discussions, towards the gray area and towards what we SHOULD do as professionals. The MPRE tends to focus on where the rule draws the line.
2) Pay Attention to Key Words: Sometimes it’s not that you don’t know the rule, or even how to apply it, but you misread the question. Maybe the question asks about civil liability, which means was the attorney negligent, versus is the attorney subject to criminal sanctions, litigation sanctions or discipline. The difference is very distinct, and sometimes the answer can change drastically based on those little words.
3) Study by practicing, and learning from the questions: The MPRE is a test that you master by practice, not by continually reviewing substance. Yes, you DO need to know the rules, but merely reviewing the rules over and over again will not do the trick. You need to practice the questions, and learn from those questions. Master the way the rule is applied, and why one question turned out one way, while another turned out to have a completely different answer. Students are tempted to assume that they don’t know enough rules, but that’s not necessarily the case, sometimes it’s the way those rules are applied.
4) Pay attention to nuances: One thing to learn from the questions is the tiny nuances you might not pick up studying the rules. For instance, you might master the rule that you can not comingle funds, and even have the exact rule number memorized verbatim. However, only the questions will show you the various ways that rule gets applied, and that’s how you REALLY master the MPRE

Friday, August 13, 2010

LawTutor's President gets Young Lawyer's Chair

Which, is an ACTUAL chair. So, pretty soon we will have an actual Captain's chair in the LawTutor's office, to commemorate all of the wonderful work Tania Shah, our fearless leader, has done!

Thursday, August 5, 2010

What NOT To Do In Law School , Free Pre Law Workshop

Join us for a FREE workshop on What NOT to do in law school, or rather, how to succeed your first semester of law school without losing your mind!

When: September 12, 2010.
Time: 12-3pm
Where: LawTutors’ office
1674 Beacon St, Suite 2
Brookline, MA 02445
Cost: FREE, and materials will be provided.


This workshop will be given by LawTutors’ President Tania Shah, and Vice President Melissa Gill, who are also adjunct professors at the University of Massachusetts Dartmouth School of Law, and who also teach the Law School Prep Course available on eCasebriefs.com (http://www.ecasebriefs.com/blog/category/law-school-prep-course/).

The seminar will go over:
• How to prepare for class in a time effective manner
• The importance of your first year grades
• How to brief a case, and make that brief work for you
• Demystifying the outlining process
• How to synthesize your notes, and how to USE your outline.
• Time management skills (ie, how not to become a hermit or lose your mind!)
• Using practice exams to your benefit
• Finally, what is IRAC and why it should be your new best friend!


This seminar is absolutely FREE, you just need to RSVP by September 9th, by emailing info@lawtutors.net or calling the LawTutors office at 617-738-4800.